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Open Poetry #49

Just read this...

J.J.thomas
Member
Posts 84

0 posted 2015-03-08 08:54 PM

I couldnt think of a title, I hope you enjoy the poem any way.

Breathing them.
Speaking them.
Living with them.
Leaving foot prints that last forever.
Leaving traces of our selves behind with them.
Simply said
Take care with them.
Knowing thier power is half the battle
Knowing how to use them,
thats the more important half.
Dont abuse words.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-03-08 09:46 PM

Words don't care if they are abused or not, they are just words. My opinion.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2015-03-09 06:20 AM

A line from your poem would have made a great title- Simply Said. And I agree with everything you said. Words may not care if they are abused but people care. Verbal abuse is as bad if not worse than physical abuse. Good poem.~L

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

3 posted 2015-03-10 10:29 AM

words have many powers, and misused can topple nations.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2015-03-10 11:24 AM

I agree on your outlook, young man. Words are very powerful.

J.J.thomas
Member
Posts 84

5 posted 2015-03-14 07:32 PM

I am a female.

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