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jwesley
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0 posted 2015-03-08 11:11 AM



The Scent of You


The Scent of You


Stole words from you,
screamed them silently,
whispered them just loud enough
for you to hear between breaths;

followed them with kisses
to places led by hands of fire;

breathed the scent of you . . .
the scent of you . . .and me –


in Love.

© wesley james beard, jr.






© wesley james beard, jr.



(Please don't assume everything I write is based on my personal life...)

[This message has been edited by jwesley (03-09-2015 11:20 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2015-03-08 11:46 AM


Love at it's steamy best... ~L
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2015-03-08 12:34 PM


Simple but oh so powerful, Jimmy. Yes indeed . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Rex Allen McCoy
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3 posted 2015-03-08 04:17 PM


This is very Nicely expressed

Namyh
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4 posted 2015-03-08 06:18 PM


jwesley - Sensual heat bathed in Love. The aroma gives you a smile you don't want to lose and the heat gives you a blister you don't mind keepin'. No poet could ask for a better reason to write. Much enjoyed this jw. Namyh  
EmmaRose
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5 posted 2015-03-08 06:31 PM


the inspiration for the poem is very much
powerful in the thoughts turned to words

RedStoneEB
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6 posted 2015-03-10 10:28 AM


you surely do have a way with words love poetry is simply heart-pulling.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2015-03-11 09:56 PM


nice...James
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8 posted 2015-03-19 10:45 PM


Jimmy, I had to wipe the steam off my glasses.  You write about love so danged well.

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