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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 The eve begins to butter my skin A herd of shiver grazes on my arm The shy of a voice walks on my ear A wisp is looking for its purse The day is now no longer broken The night is laying on her side I can almost hear her tresses Slowly, licking at her eyes A what, a could, a have and a been Gently part, a wounded way As it may returns to march Every road is not away All the words unspoken are The pieces, of apart You’re the leave that never left You’re the hands around my heart |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very kind words for love declaration , I loved rhe shortness assocations pf words and delicacy of images, very well done yann |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Only a great chef can take unlikely food combinations and make them delicious. Likewise, only a masterful poet can combine unlikely words and come up with such a great poem!~L |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So many good lines Richy...the leave that never left speaks volumes. I have a special place in my heart like that too. Hugs you  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Lori G.. i don't know if you knew but I'm a chef instructor.. and it is true for me at least.. that cooking is like writing.. they both have a myriad of ingredients to choose from to make the end product, sweet, savory, or, both.. thank you my friend for the lovely comments.. have a yummy weekend  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you Yann, that was a very nice thing to say.. i hope life has been treating you well.. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Yes Bluesy.. i hope that line always represents our poetry friendship... thank you dear heart |
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Redstart Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535 |
A fine word-tapestry, of which, 'You're the leave that never left', is the finest stitch. |
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