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icebox
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0 posted 2015-03-05 01:28 PM




She Who Goes

Through Life,

Unmarked,

Truly

Has Never

Been Touched.


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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2015-03-05 01:49 PM


There you go...thank you very much for these profound and wise words.
I have an inspirational board on pinterest and this is exactly what I'm talking about.

very cool beans!!!


Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2015-03-05 08:28 PM


True, and well-worded.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

tracie66
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3 posted 2015-03-06 04:02 AM


indeed! wise words my friend xx

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

Rex Allen McCoy
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4 posted 2015-03-06 06:29 AM


Yes... excellent piece
Redstart
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5 posted 2015-03-07 05:46 AM


Very powerful for such few words. I'm left pondering: that goes for 'he' too.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2015-03-07 11:48 AM


I'm with RedStart. I think women just wear their marks closer to the surface. ~L
latearrival
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7 posted 2015-03-07 12:46 PM



Charly,
I like and understand the message as I have lived it. But I disagree with Lori.I think Woman really handle the big stuff much better than men. Men handle the day to day demands well but given the big stuff many men seem to just disappear. Have seen it happen many times, men leaving the woman to continue to love and care for children with birth problems. I do not mean more all men as I also know some who were fantastic, but too many just walk away.  jmo,Jo

jjote
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8 posted 2015-03-07 01:10 PM


profound truly - you have the gift of saying in a few words thoughts that deserve to stir up deeper meanings. Unblemished, untouched - is there such a soul these days? But maybe I'm a little jaded.
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2015-03-07 09:10 PM


nice...james
Michael
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10 posted 2015-03-07 10:12 PM


Quite a profound statement for so few words... and it can be taken many different ways.  Wonderful piece here.

Michael

LeeJ
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11 posted 2015-03-11 10:10 AM


so true....and it is in those moments, we learn to appreciate happiness...no matter how fleeting....

Lovely!

Martie
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12 posted 2015-03-11 05:39 PM


:heart
miscellanea
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13 posted 2015-03-15 03:05 PM


Excellently expressed in few words.  Enjoyed the read!

Misc

miscellanea
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14 posted 2015-03-15 03:06 PM


Excellently expressed in few words.  Enjoyed the read!

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Marchmadness
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15 posted 2015-03-16 12:29 PM


So very true, Mr. Ice.
                Ida

Richy
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16 posted 2015-03-18 06:06 PM



I like that.. great job sir


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