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EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2015-03-05 10:37 AM

The morning is pure
in a world of the cluttered
blackbirds snack on the
morsels of kindness, left
by the passerby

intricate words, from a lexicon's
weather thoughts, framed at the
window view

white leans on branches
that struggle to dream Spring
full strength storm
the window bangs relentlessly

much is buried as the hours
accumulate, all but for your feather of blue
as if the heart could not help but notice

and somehow, once again
the imagination runs sweet when life
grows in the rose of rewind

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (03-06-2015 08:46 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2015-03-05 11:19 AM

Your poetry is delicate and so very beautiful,
your visuals and your messages are like a soft whisper. Your poem left me light headed at the thought of shedding winters coat, anticipating the first blooms of spring.

Lovely Emma...

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-03-05 11:36 AM

You have such a soft, fragile touch to all of your poetry, Emma, and this one is special within itself and the person (you) who penned it.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2015-03-06 02:02 AM

very touching and delicate, thanks

yann

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2015-03-06 03:47 AM

perfect write, love it! xx

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2015-03-06 07:20 PM

oh gosh it has just been way too long since I've had the pleasure of reading your thoughts.. your poetry reminds me of Pablo's (Neruda)with its subtlety, nature, and nuance all intertwined into one.. you are very special Emma.. I have tons of respect for your writing talent.. i hope all has been well.. have a wonderful weekend

Redstart
Senior Member

since 2014-05-16

Posts 535

6 posted 2015-03-07 04:12 AM

Must agree with some others: your poem sails over the reader like a soothing, warm breeze.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

7 posted 2015-03-07 02:57 PM

Let me climb on the band wagon too! You are always a joy to read!~L

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2015-03-08 11:17 AM

I came, I read, and I left feeling like I'd just seen the sunshine...

j.

thimothi
New Member
Posts 7
india

9 posted 2015-03-22 01:16 PM

lovely poem ......really gave me the serenity of nature.......appreciate the way you watch things around u......thanks for that wonderful poem....

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2015-03-22 05:08 PM

I love how you write!!

A

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2015-04-15 09:16 PM

nice...james

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