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Ralph's Camp Rules |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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~~~ Wake up in the morning face a ghastly fright cheeks a little hollow gills a deathly white Your eyes sunk back lost without a trace Tongue... you just can't describe the taste Your twisted spine makes your stomach sore Woozing waves... mostly vomit engulf the trailer floor You sift through the ooze as you grope for a shoe Spot a picture on camera someone snapped just for you You hear the white phone try to focus your gaze trip out the door kissing grass in a daze Those shots on the camera some funny... some crude look exactly like someone who looks exactly like you ~~~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
... and all this time I thought I had a "privacy" fence ... cute, my friend!! j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Yeah, I have to admit I have been where this poem takes us. Many times. And yep, it is not a good place to be, but I don't know about you, but I kept going back for more, more, more. How in the world I lived over it is a miracle. Jimmy is right, it is very funny. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Must be a guy thing! As far as a good time goes, you lost me at vomit. But the poem was rather humorous. I liked it in spite of myself. ~L |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
guess I'm a bit of a wussy... didn't return for the second round |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 Made me laugh. And the moral of this story is, if you don't really like cleaning up vomit and watching yourself be an idiot on YouTube, stick to Diet Coke. Which is something some people need a lot of teaching to learn.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Youtube?... we could get discovered and end up on the Dr Phil show or Ellen or Copps |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I expect so! Let's do it!Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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rex king New Member Posts 7 |
Michael Jackson and that girl he chase through the wood.....where's my main man Vincent price? |
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