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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 I guess this spot is good as any The bridge I’m on has no more teeth Before is still, afraid to give Then, is still afraid to live I never even met her needs I was never introduced But I see her as the sand Shining in the surf seduced Let me covet you with promise Only sightless dreams can keep We will use our mouths for silence Language really is release The earth is on its knees again Taking in the sky All the light is once again Underneath the night Wishes try to whet the hunger With their daily useless, words Life is just a breeze of cages Love is just a wounded bird It’s hard to breathe without the meaning That is always, hid “You don’t love her anymore, why, what happened? “Well, you did” |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sometimes we need to work it out with a dialogue to ourselves as you so eloquently did here, Richy. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry touches deeply...your choice of words is a poetic panorama. Like a breathtaking sunset, the quiet beauty is bittersweet as it submits to the darkness. Like I said, I really do miss you when you are gone. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You haven't lost your touch, Rich. Nice to see you're back. Ida |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I've missed you Richy. Your pic is magnificent! Your poem, painfully poignant. Your words still hold their magic. It is good to have you back.  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Love what you do and the way you do it.Yes you have been missed.Jo |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Well done! Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thanks so much everyone for the nice comments I've missed you all as well  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Let me covet you with promise Only sightless dreams can keep We will use our mouths for silence Language really is release Fantastic, Richy showed up on Pip again! And well, it's a treat to read your poetry again. You are quite complex, deep and yet soft in a way, I like your words very much. Margherita |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you Margherita as always.. i hope life has been especially kind to you my dear friend.. have a wonderful weekend |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was a whisper of memories, softly penned and remembered by your heart.... Beautiful write.... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Lee J thank you my friend for all the nice comments today, you are too kind |
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