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Out of the Blue
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Out of the Blue |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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Out of the Blue In that brief moment in time when your smiling eyes met mine I fell under your spell. We composed an ouverture made of silent heart notes. The allegro vivace would follow we trusted our feelings and fate. We were busy living our lives, but every now and then thoughts of what could be crossed our minds and our dreams. Imagination led us back on our tracks. Fate was at work to keep the promise. Laughter and tears, longing and joy revealed our innermost emotions. We were a gift to each other and knew it but we dared not to unwrap it fully. And then suddenly it was too late anyway ... Do you now remember how flowers sprouted under each of our steps? Do you hear the music we made when we were holding each other tight? Do you feel my arms around you like when we danced in the moonlight? Now that you have mingled with the stars of the firmament above I feel our love has not dimmed it has now a different glow it has become a permanent light that fills my heart with gratitude. You stir new soul songs across the ether now. They land like falling tears upon the meadow of my heart. Tomorrow is bound to arrive meanwhile we hum our secret tunes. Fate is always at work, we trust. One day your smiling eyes will once again meet mine ... * |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What a sad, beautiful piece of work, Margherita . . . Oh, to have a promising relationship cut down is a tragic loss. But your loss has been shaped by your memories that you salvaged from back then. And yes, I have a strong feeling those two eyes will see each other again. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you very much, dear Jerry, for your loving comment. Yes it is sad, but my tears are often stopped by a memory of joy. "Out of the Blue" is a double reference to the beginning as well as to the end, as I casually learned about his transition and it is so strange a feeling ... Margherita |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Margherita, it is surprisng how feelings 'specially of love) create musical and songs in soul, inner music which become poetry too, the delicacy of the poem is charming and heart provoking, thanks a lot yann |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Lovely and sad, but you have brought back memorable moments that you are now recalling out of the blue. Writing keeps them fresh and new and helps smoothen the pain. Thanks for sharing your intimate feelings. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
oh dear Margherita this is such a beautiful but sad love story, thankyou for sharing  Love is the life of the soul... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Yann, for your kind appreciation ... yes you are right, love and music go hand in hand! Dear Josefina, thank you so much for your loving comment. Yes, the memories surface with great intensity and they bring both smiles and tears. Thank you kindly, dear Tracie, for your loving comment. As I said I look at this story as a gift, even if it did not evolve as we wished in dreams. Hugs to you for your own sad loss. Love and peace. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Heartfelt song to the stars. Beautiful tribute. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
". . . love and music go hand in hand" - seems to me they are one and the same, no matter the genre. Beautifully "felt" my friend. enjoyed... jimmy |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Yes, what ever love we have shared remains forever within our heart. This is special and no one can change or take w away those memories. jo |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'slice of life,' love, and loss write! an especially fine line: "We composed an overture made of silent heart notes." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
beautiful...and I like your anticipation and hope for eternity...james |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Kathleen, Jimmy, Martyjo, Bruce and James, thank you from my heart for your heartwarming comments here. Love, Margherita |
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MissMarti Member Posts 87 USA |
loved this through tears! Beautiful memories of love and loss. MissMarti |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Do you now remember how flowers sprouted under each of our steps? Do you hear the music we made when we were holding each other tight? Do you feel my arms around you like when we danced in the moonlight? oh my, this was lovely, and would have taken me back to those days, if I would have allowed it to....LOL so, wonderful to read you! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
you little romantic you.. out of the blue nothing.. you were born to entice the world around you.. love this Margy girl i hope your days are going well  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sad but beautiful thoughts from a beautiful soul. Margherita. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Dear Margherita ~ I am touched by the hope in this poem. You have enveloped me in love in the most beautiful way. Thank you. Xoxo A |
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