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Midnight Lover
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Midnight Lover |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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you float above me midnight lover a wisp of lovely fragrance envelop me with sensuous ecstasy you take your time gliding ever so close drifting in, moving away I see you now I don't misty lover come to me oh, that is good I see you now but you fade away teasing me so giving me nothing, giving me all wanting you so much and hold fiery passion mystifying wants unbridled desires I rise up toward the shadows arms reaching, stretching to stroke your divine body, press my lips against your fragile throat oh, you're not there gone away, gone away, gone away midnight lover you tease me breathlessly ©February 9, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
a love poem which made me think of a part of fantasy, of the unknown part of feelings, the presence or the absence of the beloved one have a considerable impact, thanks for the poem yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You are very welcomed, Yann. To have the reader of my poem put himself inside the poem is the ultimate achievement and hearing about it is a beautiful thing. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
A poem belongs to the reader they say. In this poem, I can empathize in the midnight scene you are writing, as if I'm the midnight lover.  February is truly a love month, it's in the air, and poets are so infected.. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
If you think you are the Midnight Lover, jjote, then the midnight Lover you are. Thank you for your loving and teasing . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
oh this is so beautifully written, you write wonderful sensual pieces Jerry xx Love is the life of the soul... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I’m so happy you enjoyed reading my poem this morning Tracie, and thank you for the kind response to it. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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