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Open Poetry #49

Vying For Your Attention

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2015-02-09 12:12 PM

Draping my restless
across your distracted
Vying for your attention
competing with responsible things
Your long and hard
you put into work
while I wait upon your idle

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-02-09 05:57 PM

Heh.Heh You haven't lost your "touch."

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2015-02-10 06:14 AM

Thanks my friend! I even surprise myself. ~L

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2015-02-10 11:26 PM

love, love, love this

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2015-02-11 06:47 AM

Thanks Tracie! I really like this one too. I wish everything I wrote was as good as this one turned out. I think my muse wrote it in my sleep so I couldn't mess it up. LOL! ~L

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2015-02-11 07:55 PM

enjoyed...james

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2015-02-12 11:20 AM

Thanks James!

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