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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Revival Riding on the late night train enjoying the rhythm of the falling rain, soon i'll be arriving at Paris Station a favorite stop on my summer vacation. My friend Tanya is there waiting for my arrival, my thoughts breath her she is my hearts revival. JamesLee 2/07/15 |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
wow! loved the beauty in this image filled write of yours. Love is the life of the soul... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
finely succinct 'slice-of-life' write with overtones of Romanticism ! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
James Michael, l Loved my trip to Paris but alas no waiting honey there for me. Enjoy your visit. Jo [This message has been edited by latearrival (02-09-2015 11:29 AM).] |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
i like how it rhymes very catchy and it even holds a message of excitement. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
how deep is your love, specially in Paris, very appreciate the romanticism of your poem james, thanks a lot yann |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nice, James! Enjoy the day for me too! J. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
thank you tracie, secondhand, late arrival, RedStone, 2islander2 and jwesley for the kind remarks...james |
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