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tracie66
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0 posted 2015-02-07 09:07 PM


She found her wings one day in spring
Amongst the daffodils & the pansies
She danced her little fairy dance
Admiring her wings so fancy

She skipped her way to the fairy queen
Who with her magic wand did weave
A spell so very magical
Her wings no longer “make believe”

with a squeal of pure delight
She began to fly with ease
Her little fairy wings carrying her
Within the gentle breeze

Now this little girl of the fae
Is the happiest of them all
For she now has her wings so fancy
to help her fly from spring through to the fall
~~~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

© Copyright 2015 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2015-02-07 09:16 PM


Tracie...good to see you once more. No, the blue pages are never far from my mind...thank you for your comment on mine.

tracie66
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2 posted 2015-02-07 09:30 PM


thanks sweetie, you got me thinking about our gorgeous Marge, going to repost a dedication to her. Thank you xx

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

latearrival
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3 posted 2015-02-08 03:48 PM


Lovely story,thank you. jo
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2015-02-08 06:22 PM


This . . .
quote:
spring through to the fall

could be taken a couple of ways.

I don't usually get into fairies, etc., but i thoroughly enjoyed this one . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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5 posted 2015-02-08 06:45 PM


Now this brings a smile to a face that doesn't see them much anymore.  Faeries have always been a weak spot for me.

Michael

2islander2
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6 posted 2015-02-10 10:13 AM


charming poetry, an original story we can fly with, loved the travel
yann



jwesley
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7 posted 2015-02-10 12:28 PM


Love it Tracie, as I always do with most of what you write... going to pass it on to my granddaughter too...

j.

jjote
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8 posted 2015-02-10 01:06 PM


There's always a child inside all of us and we never can outgrow it. This is a light and fanciful one, reminds me of Peter Pan's friends from Neverland. Refreshing write,  enjoyed with my breakfast.
tracie66
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9 posted 2015-02-10 11:05 PM


thankyou everyone! Michael Im pleased to have placed a smile upon your face.
Im glad you all like this lil fairy poem of mine

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2015-02-11 08:15 PM


nice...james
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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11 posted 2015-02-11 09:28 PM


This would make a lovely storybook. Your Fairy is irresistible! ~L
Marchmadness
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12 posted 2015-02-14 04:09 AM


Cute. I think I'll save it for my granddaughters.
                             Ida

tracie66
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13 posted 2015-02-14 04:12 AM


Thank you James & Lori

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

tracie66
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14 posted 2015-02-14 04:13 AM


Ida I do hope your granddaughter enjoys it

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

Margherita
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15 posted 2015-02-16 04:27 PM


How delightful, dear Tracie (good to see you back!).

I easily grew my own wings while reading your story ... you inspire!

Love,
Margherita

tracie66
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16 posted 2015-02-17 06:03 AM


awe!! thanks so much lovely miss Margherita and it is good to be back

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

Rex Allen McCoy
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17 posted 2015-02-24 12:03 PM


great to see you again Tracie... hopefully those little friends you bring will be flying here soon and bringing the spring flowers with them
tracie66
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18 posted 2015-02-24 05:28 AM


nice to see you as well Rex - I agree!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

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