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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2015-02-06 10:05 PM



My grandson walked up to me-
Said, Pawpaw, come and see-
A picture from the attic,
Of what you used to be.

I looked at that old photo-
From nineteen eighty-one,
And marveled at the damage,
The passing years had done.

Tall, and mighty skinny-
Dressed in worn out jeans;
A silver belly Stetson,
A trophy buckle gleams…

I reckon that he nailed it-
“What I used to be.”
A cowboy and a rounder-
Living wild and free.

A cowboy? his eyes gleaming-
Paw paw is that so?
I guess that this was taken-
A hundred years ago!

Well, not quite, son. I told him-
But pretty close I guess…
It must have took might near that long,
To get me in this mess.

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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2015-02-07 02:32 AM


Those old pictures will get you every time.
Makes you wonder how celebrities feel when they see their younger selves in movies etc.      
                                Ida

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 2015-02-07 12:20 PM


The difference in a "view" from innocent, youthful eyes is an amazing thing.  I've been working on my own personal mess here so long I'm not sure there'd be a decent picture of "what I used to be" somewhere.

Michael

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
3 posted 2015-02-07 12:55 PM



Love this post, Grandchildren see with wiser eyes sometimes. I mentioned to one of my young grandsons once, as I handed him some fresh baked cookies, that I could only have one as I was getting too fat. His quick reply said with his sweet innocence and without hesitation was, "You are not fat, you are my grandma. Best to you,jo

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2015-02-18 04:42 AM


oh this is wonderful! a gorgeous read xx

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2015-08-15 09:06 PM


wouldn't it be interesting to lay photo after photo next to each other representing each year of our life seeing how we progressed year by year...for some that would be many...james
Namyh
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since 2009-01-20
Posts 988

6 posted 2015-08-16 05:10 PM


Gunslinger - It's ironic how kids will say to us the very same things we once said to our parents and grands. Thanks for the memories. Namyh
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