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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2015-01-31 07:07 AM



not content
to wander down to the park
with other old men
sit on the invariably gnarled benches
swap stories
from whatever past
they think they can remember
mostly all fabrications
and of course
they talk about me
shaking their heads and whisper
he thinks he’s a poet
they all have a subdued hearty laugh
because a real laugh
might cause some to choke up
it’s the emphysema
don’t you know
the thing is
old men’s gossip turns me off
while they think
I sit in The Hovel
and brood
I am constantly busy
writing
I have my poems
they help to sustain me
I just finished co-authoring a novel
"Magical"
I live in worlds they have
no notion of
true, they get to see more nature
than do I
but I get to see the world
through my dreams
I turn into the written word

©January 20, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton

Elin Saari has lived with terror no woman should ever have to endure. Devlin Grimm, the man she fell hard for turned out to be so cruel to her she began to silently call him Satan. The years spent with Satan were so severe she truly felt she had no mind of her own. Still, something inside of her made her make the break and she filed for divorce. Satan upped the ante and she had to run to get away from him. Wherever she went he would find her and harass her. She was at her wits end when something profound happened. Through the magic of a strange necklace she began to receive messages, until desperately she tried to summon whoever was trying to contact her. Touch Starlin' walked into her life and explained who he was and how closely connected they were. Touch took charge of trying to rid Satan – the name she had started calling him was closer to the truth that she could have ever known. Satan follows them wherever they go and Elin begins to doubt Touch's Powers.

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~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2015-01-31 08:04 AM


Well, my friend, I have to agree I can't really picture you in a park playing checkers.  I don't think you were ever one for hanging with the guys anyway because you were too busy chasing skirts. I seriously doubt they pity you, but I know they have got to be curious about the mysterious man and his little dog...  ~L
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2015-01-31 08:08 AM


Good morning Lori, and thank you for gracing me with your presence this day. Hah! Yeah, you're right about me and the park setting, that never was what I was about. Hope everything is well with you this day.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
3 posted 2015-01-31 08:05 PM


I have always given the freedom to others who think they know another lives and talk about their ideas.They own their thoughts and are of no concern to those of us to who do not  fit their picture of how life should be led. Toss that their words  away and let the old men  have their day.Best to you  Jo. P.S "their words" are one less thing for you to carry around yours are fine enough.
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2015-01-31 08:11 PM


Thanks, Jo, I will do just that.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2015-01-31 09:20 PM


Congratulations on the publishing of your book. You're right there, writing can and do sustain us, is a saving grace and writers do get inspiration on how to live life  through their own writings.Good luck, its too cold to sit in the park nowadays, anyway.
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2015-01-31 09:24 PM


Ahhh . . . Not down here in South Louisiana it isn't at least not down here in south Louisiana. Thank you, jjote, for you comments, they are appreciated.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2015-02-01 11:51 PM


Old age would be pretty sad without my poetry. I couldn't agree with you more.
                                Ida

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
8 posted 2015-02-02 07:52 AM


Many thanks Ida, I appreciate your thought.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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