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Daddy Goose38
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0 posted 2015-01-20 05:56 PM



Places
How may places are there?
Well, for one, there is my place.
I know my place exists because I am in it.
Then there is your place,
I know you are at your place right now.
That makes two places.
I know you are at your place
Even though I can't prove it and I'm not at your place

The reason I am not at your place
is that I'm at my place.
And you can't be in two places at the same time.
and Even if I don't know where your places is, I I I mean are,
But can not prove that you are not there,
So therefore you are there.
Okay, so anyway ... so then there is the other place,
You know, the place you go to when you die.
So that means there are three places.
Then there is another place

Like, If you aren't at your place or at my place.
Or the other place.
I don't know what or whom might be in the another place,
Not to be confused with "the other place."
or the other place.
I don't know what happens there, or anything.
O, then I for got about the same place
and the different place.
Yet I know another place exists
Because I can not prove that it doesn't.
And thefore it does.
So that makes four places. And so ...
Will it be your place
or mine? ... :------)

Jaime
I just made this up.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2015-01-21 04:52 PM




I can tell you had fun writing this and all these places now twirl in your head ... that's a dance, as good as any other kind of dance.

Dance on! There are endless places where you can do it!

Margherita

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