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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2015-01-17 09:59 PM


   Love and Spring

Snowflakes dense and
soundlessly swirling  
dance Winter’s tune
from a boundless sky
of ever-rolling clouds
through a thousand
  ‘endless’ hills
and hidden places,
for there is nowhere
they cannot go.
Here all the world
seems frozen
in this moment
as a lonely heart
awaiting Love
   and Spring.

                --- b. e. adams (1/17/2015)


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-01-17 11:41 PM


"endless" hills . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2015-01-18 02:42 AM


It seems that after Christmas time passes quickly into spring.
                                Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2015-01-18 10:19 AM


Thanks JP and Ida ! ...

Autumn is my favorite season but Spring plays a close second ...

hopefully, I give fair 'voice' to all the seasons though?!

Margherita
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4 posted 2015-01-18 01:27 PM


So beautiful, dear Bruce! You share Winter's magic masterfully, though you already long for Spring and Love. When we are totally in the moment, there is nothing like the stillness of a snowy landscape, then there is nothing like the beauty and fragrance of Spring's blossoming, then there is nothing like a summer sunset, and there is nothing like the colors of autumn. And yes you share such moments in a very precious way of all the seasons.



Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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5 posted 2015-01-18 04:43 PM


Thank you, Margherita !
2islander2
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6 posted 2015-01-19 12:44 PM


this is so fine, the atmosphere of the incoming landscape and erything, very fine penning, thanks


yann


MissMarti
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7 posted 2015-01-19 06:36 AM


This is an awesome piece of writing. I just loved it and do wish I could write like this!
secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2015-01-19 08:45 AM


Thanks again to all of you !!
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