Open Poetry #49 |
Love and Spring |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Love and Spring Snowflakes dense and soundlessly swirling dance Winter’s tune from a boundless sky of ever-rolling clouds through a thousand ‘endless’ hills and hidden places, for there is nowhere they cannot go. Here all the world seems frozen in this moment as a lonely heart awaiting Love and Spring. --- b. e. adams (1/17/2015) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"endless" hills . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It seems that after Christmas time passes quickly into spring. Ida |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks JP and Ida ! ... Autumn is my favorite season but Spring plays a close second ... hopefully, I give fair 'voice' to all the seasons though?! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So beautiful, dear Bruce! You share Winter's magic masterfully, though you already long for Spring and Love. When we are totally in the moment, there is nothing like the stillness of a snowy landscape, then there is nothing like the beauty and fragrance of Spring's blossoming, then there is nothing like a summer sunset, and there is nothing like the colors of autumn. And yes you share such moments in a very precious way of all the seasons. Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you, Margherita ! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is so fine, the atmosphere of the incoming landscape and erything, very fine penning, thanks yann |
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MissMarti Member Posts 87 USA |
This is an awesome piece of writing. I just loved it and do wish I could write like this! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks again to all of you !! |
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