JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
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2014-12-30
08:11 AM
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the rain spoke to me as it beat down upon the roof you need love it said causing a smile to grace my face as the rain was quite insistent I asked myself who would I see if a mirror I looked into would I see who I recollected I was somehow I surely doubt that the rain has convinced me otherwise I would see . . . The Picture of Dorian Gray perhaps rain speaks to me and has said I've lived a few lifetimes in this shell of a body I have hung onto the rain is violently beating against the roof (or my thoughts) causing my imagination to soar believing love has truly come to me ah love, love me if you will embrace me as dedicated as the rain oh let your love surround me with rain-like caresses make me forget the weary, the meaningless voices repeating all the tired old cliques love me differently and like the rain; be wet for me
©December 13, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton
~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~
[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-30-2014 10:10 AM).]
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katahdin
Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
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2014-12-31
03:17 AM
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Wow! Hot(and wet)stuff here! you made me like the rain! Kat >^..^<
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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
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South Louisiana
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2014-12-31
08:07 AM
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Hah! Thank you Kat for strolling through my poem. Yeah. Rain is good.~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~
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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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2015-01-24
07:06 PM
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nice...james
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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
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2015-01-24
07:07 PM
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Thanks James.~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
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California
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2015-01-24
10:06 PM
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quote: embrace me as dedicated as the rain
Striking reference, and poem in general. Nicely done, Jer. Michael
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JerryPat2
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South Louisiana
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2015-01-24
11:09 PM
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Much appreciated Michael.~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~
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