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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-12-30 08:11 AM


        

the rain spoke to me
as it beat down upon the roof
you need love it said
causing a smile to grace my face
as the rain was quite insistent
I asked myself
who would I see
if a mirror I looked into
would I see who I recollected I was
somehow I surely doubt that
the rain has convinced me otherwise
I would see . . .
The Picture of Dorian Gray
perhaps rain speaks to me and has said
I've lived a few lifetimes
in this shell of a body I have hung onto
the rain
is violently beating against the roof
(or my thoughts)
causing my imagination
to soar
believing love has truly come to me
ah love, love me
if you will
embrace me as dedicated as the rain
oh let your love
surround me with rain-like caresses
make me forget
the weary, the meaningless
voices repeating all the tired old cliques
love me differently
and like the rain; be wet
for me

©December 13, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (12-30-2014 10:10 AM).]

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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2014-12-31 03:17 AM


Wow! Hot(and wet)stuff here! you made me like the rain!
Kat >^..^<

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-12-31 08:07 AM


Hah! Thank you Kat for strolling through my poem. Yeah. Rain is good.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-01-24 07:06 PM


nice...james
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2015-01-24 07:07 PM


Thanks James.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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5 posted 2015-01-24 10:06 PM


quote:
embrace me as dedicated as the rain

Striking reference, and poem in general.  Nicely done, Jer.

Michael

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2015-01-24 11:09 PM


Much appreciated Michael.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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