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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2014-12-29 03:52 AM


I am inclined to think,
that as often as not,
there is more true history
in the remains of a clay pot
than in the corrupted words
of priests and kings.
For there is honesty and purity
in simple things.

                      Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2014 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-12-29 06:58 AM


Well Amen to that! You know they say a broken watch tells the correct time twice every 24 hrs where even the most accurate watch can be off by just a millisecond.
I feel the same way about poverty. Living closer to the bone is a more "honest" state of being in that there is less money to buffer you from the harsh realities of the world.  

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-12-29 07:52 AM


What Lori said.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2014-12-29 11:18 AM


wonderful ida, only you could dig out this clay pot of poetry, i am thrilled and admirative, thanks

yann

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
4 posted 2014-12-29 11:50 AM


Enjoyed,  We never really knew what was going on and wanted to, Now that we know it is really too much and it gets our dander up.
Best to you Ida, Jo

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
5 posted 2014-12-29 05:25 PM


Ha!  I was just in a clay pot (6 incher) today and the only revelation it gave me was ANT BITES!!!

And, of course, why my plant was dying...heh, heh!


Cool piece ... enjoyed

j.

Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

6 posted 2015-01-22 08:30 AM


Wise words, and so very true. This wrapped itself around me like a favourite blanket. I'll take the clay pot any day. One for the memory. I can definitely see myself quoting this in future conversations, I hope you don't mind?
secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2015-01-22 11:24 AM


ABSOLUTELY true (superbly put)! ...

I also feel the same when I look at the 'Standing Stones' (Stenness; Avebury; Stone Henge, etc.) of 'Pre-history' as well ! If you wish to see something
particularly fascinating, look up the mysterious Neolithic complex they've unexpectedly discovered at the Ness of Brodgar, Orkney Islands, Scotland.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
8 posted 2015-01-22 09:57 PM


Ida
Just love the outstanding honesty of this little piece.
The truth shall set you free....

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
9 posted 2015-01-22 10:47 PM


Thank you all for your comments, Not at all Redstart.
                    Ida

katahdin
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10 posted 2015-01-22 11:42 PM


well said!
Kat >^..^<

EmmaRose
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11 posted 2015-01-26 09:38 PM


agreed. simplicity equals purity equals truth
OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa
12 posted 2015-02-07 12:59 PM


Love it, love it, love it, LOVE IT, LOVE IT LLLLLLOVVVVVVVE IT, Ida!

Classical Civilisation was one of my majors and the Classical Civilsation lecturers were the best lecturers in the whole of the University and they made me fall in love with particularly Ancient Greece, even more than I had been since I first fell in love with it at the age of 7.  When I was later teaching in a primary school, I managed to wriggle Greek vase painting into the History syllabus and my pupils were just as excited about it as I was.  You brought all that back for me, Ida, in your superb little cameo!  THANK YOU!

Owl

Michael
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13 posted 2015-02-07 06:47 PM


A profound truth, Ida.  Kind of follows the "believe none of what you hear and only half of what you see" philosophy.  There is so much most of the world does not see, or bother to see as the case may be, for all of the nonsense we do pay attention to.

Michael

Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California
14 posted 2015-02-10 08:52 AM


Thank you Diana and Michael.
                         Ida

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
15 posted 2015-02-14 05:03 AM


wow! yes there is indeed!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
16 posted 2015-02-16 05:00 PM


One of your true jewels, dear Ida. You succeed in saying so much in just a few perfect lines.

Love,
Margherita

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