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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2014-12-26 11:05 AM



Too often, too many givings

are given without thought

deeper than a generic

that will do

and check another name off the list.



The gift of giving

is lost on those

whose busy burdens steal their time

to contemplate their own true heart’s desire

to give what is really wanted…

To caress each one

with singular thought,

to bless their

holiday hearts

with warmth and cheer.



LGR© 12/6/10


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latearrival
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1 posted 2014-12-26 11:19 AM


Lori, yes,Too often this is true. I have been fortunate in that most who kindly give to me, know me well and use that thought. JO
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-12-26 11:40 AM


I was going through some old emails and found this.  I know in years past the burden of "buy, buy, buy." has put a damper on my joy of giving.  But I think as I have gotten older I am sweating the small stuff less.
JerryPat2
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3 posted 2014-12-26 11:47 AM


Yes. Someone a while back sent me some doodles. They are still on my wall and I look at them daily. That was a present given with good feeling and I will always treasure it.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

Redstart
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4 posted 2014-12-26 11:55 AM


That is so true, dear Lori. If someone you truly loved gave you a  Cartier watch, or cupped your face in their hands, and said: 'My God, I love you.' Which would you prefer?
Yes, I'm getting a bit soppy, but who cares? It's Christmas.

latearrival
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5 posted 2014-12-26 11:57 AM


Lori and Jerry, One day one of my grandchildren wrote on the hall way wall with a magic marker and drew  a picture.After that I drew some stick figures and invited every grand child to write on the wall and make their mark. One child  decided to put a dress one of the figures I put there.My son added a sun with rays up on the corner.And over the years I  prized that wall.One day I needed repair work to the bath fixtures and with out asking or saying a word the plumber and his helper took out a large piece of the wall to get to the bath shower and recovered the cut out place.I saved those cut out pieces but had to repaint the wall. Jo
latearrival
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6 posted 2014-12-26 12:00 PM


Lori and Redstart. Yes  that is what a woman really wants: to feel the love not see it in a gift bought from a store.jo  
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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7 posted 2014-12-26 02:25 PM


Jerry, Redstart and Joe,
It is always the thought that counts. One Xmas when my boys were small and we had very little money, their father told me what all he wished he could have gotten me for Xmas. I don't remember now what all he said. What I do remember is that he had paid attention and really did know what I wanted. That was the best gift I got from him in the 20 years we were together.    

latearrival
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8 posted 2014-12-26 02:48 PM


And Loris that is what counts in the end

"Someone listened"

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