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2islander2
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0 posted 2014-12-21 12:36 PM


I'd like to drink a little beer,
Fruity in the raspberry or in the pear,
for making the evening cozy,
And what bubbles go up in my head,
A small whimsical beer,
One to whom we give the spanking
As to a provocating brunette,
A beer which knows Belgium
Or who likes Ireland,
A beer which makes vague the solitude,
And on Sundays which ends,
A happy or unfortunate beer,
Which does not know why we drink her,
But a beer which offers itself without mattering,
I would like to drink a little beer
To think less in tomorrow,
To take advantage of the moment which fits me ..

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-12-21 02:11 PM


Ahhh, Yann you could have written that poem for me for it pretty much said everything that needed saying. Although I would have to substitute cheap California burgundy for the beer.

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

RedStoneEB
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2 posted 2014-12-21 04:20 PM


i'd like to drink whatever makes me forget but i guess beer is good enough.

RS

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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3 posted 2014-12-21 09:31 PM


I'm more of a whiskey kinda girl but this makes beer sound lovely. Enjoyed.

-Trina
...because the most powerful words in your life are "I might be wrong"...

ethome
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4 posted 2014-12-21 09:35 PM


Hey Yann I love all those little beer drinking reasons you write about here.
Really enjoyed this a lot.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

2islander2
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5 posted 2014-12-22 01:46 AM


thanks Jerry, your comment is gracious and vey kind


yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2014-12-22 01:49 AM


thanks redstone, evryone get a eason for drinking, but we have to be moderate in everything, i really don't do advertising for drinking, i was in a mood of a little beer, once in a while, thanks for commenting


yann

2islander2
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7 posted 2014-12-22 01:50 AM


thanks trina, fir the comment, looked to me like a whiskey symphony


yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2014-12-22 01:52 AM


thaks ethome, i frink very occasionnaly, it has to be  pleasure not an addiction to be enjoyable, thanks for the kind comment


yann

Margherita
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9 posted 2014-12-22 04:21 PM


You have brought smiles with this well conceived poem, dear Yann.

You really said this very well, enjoying a cozy moment. I have never liked beer (nor other alcoholic drinks, except champagne for the special events ), but when I was in Belgium recently my son in law brought one of those fruity beers and I loved it very much! Yes it was Raspberries ... mmmmm! Good that I can't find it here!

Much enjoyed.
Love,
Margherita

2islander2
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10 posted 2014-12-22 09:01 PM


thanks Margherita , i like too these fruity beers, thre are not very recent, when I wad Young, the belgian beers with cherry already exist, u don't drink much, a beer in trhree month, and that the pleasure of savouring it, this is a poem for the pleasure, too, the cozy, i am plesaed that you enjoyed a rasberry beer, there are pretty new indeed and specially made for those who fear these kinds of beverages,

tchin, tchin


yann



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