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Fabiani
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0 posted 2014-12-20 04:33 AM



Tomorrow is nearly yesterday

I am wherever Forever is

In Deathlessness

Breathing in Breathlessness

It's time to rethink every fact that is imaginable
Survival instinct dwells in a past that is inhabitable
I happen to pull fast ones over the slow p

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RedStoneEB
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1 posted 2014-12-20 02:43 PM


a collection of short thoughts, but somewhere it captured me, tomorrow is nearly yesterday i've read countless poems from upcoming poets, most pick subjects that are common, and seasonal, and the most part safe, but to expand your thoughts out into that area that isn't marked with understanding but is commonly felt because even prying into the non-sense, to make sense is a leap.
Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
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2 posted 2014-12-20 02:49 PM


That's great, but by the title:I wanted more balls! 'I Am I said'   ...Neil Diamond. That's harsh on my part,but that's how I feel.GET THERE!
Fabiani
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Mesa, Az
3 posted 2014-12-20 06:40 PM


I am a Vomit Morning Mist

I am the Rolling fart Fog

I am the Salty Sack slime between the Toes

I am Fated to be Hated

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