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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2014-12-19 02:49 PM



It is in the mind of men and women’
oft sullen and distort; in blood we carry
all our worry’ in love we do abort.
Oft centered on the strength in longing,
I see no mannerism that can fathom
the distance between the truth,
where men become emotional weeping
and women regain their foundations of youth.

And here in the darkest days even though
the light shines through, here, in this darkness,
our love a roguish blue.

© Copyright 2014 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
latearrival
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1 posted 2014-12-19 04:27 PM


Redstone, sad thoughts coming  forth. Blessings to you.Enjoyed your sharing. JO
Margherita
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2 posted 2014-12-20 04:00 PM


where men become emotional weeping
and women regain their foundations of youth.


The one who loves more suffers more it seems and if this happens to be a man, emotional weeping isn't a sign of weakness anymore, it shows that men too are learning to cope, for tears are healing.

Good that the light shines through, all will be well then.

Intense write, dear Lee.

Margherita

Redstart
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3 posted 2014-12-20 04:18 PM


I'm gonna be honest again. Though I love your words: balls are needed
Margherita
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4 posted 2014-12-20 04:29 PM


There is a time for tears and another for "the balls", one does not exclude the other, they can co-exist I think.


RedStoneEB
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5 posted 2014-12-21 02:46 AM


i'm gonna be honest with your reply going to everyones post and saying balls are needed is some childish comeback.
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