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flash
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miami beach, florida

0 posted 2014-12-16 10:11 AM


Haibun:

Stopping by a Schoolyard


I live near a schoolyard and sometimes I stop and watch as children play during the time they are outdoors. One day--as I stood watching them running and chasing and screaming-- a tearful sadness descended upon me.  . . it seemed only yesterday I was among them--running up and down without locks or paychecks or blood pressure pills...

schoolyard fence -
when did i end up
on this side?

     ---flash


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-12-16 11:09 AM


I sadly hear you talking . . . Yep . . . Uh huh . . .

~*~ When politicians give up on liberty, it falls to poets to preserve it. Or write its epitaph. ~*~

Margherita
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2 posted 2014-12-16 01:31 PM


Great and intense flashback emotions here, dear Al!

For a few years my daughter lived just in front of a school and while most people tend to complain about the noise children produce, I found it wondrous. All that fearless passionate living, screaming, running, was after all one single praise to BEING.

That's what we miss. And you say it with a touch of longing that always remains alive within.

Enjoyed this much.

Love,
Margherita

flash
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3 posted 2014-12-16 02:39 PM


Margherita, Jerry: thanks for sharing your thoughts. Glad this seems to resonate. And thanks Margherita for your own story with your daughter. Yeah, I believe the children artex like savages trying to send us  a message through their bodies while their bodies arec still alive enough and able to transmit and feel and run and scream:

screaming children chasing children screaming

That sums it. . .

--flash


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