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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-12-15 11:43 AM



The steel gray clouds
of late December are heavy laden.
They have overcast the sky for days.
They are sullen and unyeiding.
It looks as if it just might snow.
And thus the child of my soul
is awakened with hope and anticipation.
My mood soars to the clouds
as if to peek inside
upon waiting flakes to fall.
While the wind whirls
my mind with warm memories
of coziness
I am filled with contentment.
My heart feasts upon
the gloomy porridge sky.

LGRĀ©12/15/14



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latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
1 posted 2014-12-15 11:54 AM


Lori, nice to read a snow is coming story being a happy one.The only other one who sounds lie this is my grandson who is a paramedic but in winter plows as a small business on the side.
Enjoy making snow angels and forts. Jo

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-12-15 12:16 PM


Hope that snow makes its way there on Christmas Eve.

Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2014-12-16 01:11 PM


quote:
The steel gray clouds
of late December are heavy laden.
They have overcast the sky for days.
They are sullen and unyielding.
It looks as if it just might snow.
And thus the child of my soul
is awakened with hope and anticipation.
My mood soars to the clouds
as if to peek inside
upon waiting flakes to fall.
While the wind whirls
my mind with warm memories
of coziness
I am filled with contentment.
My heart feasts upon
the gloomy porridge sky.


Delightful, dear Lori. Just jumped into my heart

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2014-12-16 10:24 PM


Margherita
You always know the things to say to make me feel good! Bless your heart!

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