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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-12-15 09:50 AM





my hush-hush secret
gives meaning to the word
tell
the gray fog
outside my door begs for it to be told
but no
I can never
break my promise made
I cherish your confidence
which would certainly be suspended
if I were to break it
so I shan't
still somebody
needs to tell it
if not I
who?

©December 12, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton


Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward.

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2014-12-15 10:57 AM


So you have a dilemma, dear Jerry! It is not easy to keep secrets, some are even heavy to carry within us, but when we promise not to break the confidence ... you gave this the suspense and uneasiness that is connected with secrets.

Margherita psst psst

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-12-15 11:20 AM


I really liked your psst psst, so this is what it's all about . . . She was only a very young teenager when . . . Oh dear, she is outside banging on the door with one hand and waving a fourteen inch French knife with the other hand and screaming obscenities. I must go, she is about to break down the . . .

Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward.

Margherita
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3 posted 2014-12-15 11:33 AM


Oh, my goodness, Jerry! Hope you can get hold of this embarrassing situation and threat! Come back to tell us!

M

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2014-12-15 11:46 AM


Jerry, heh heh! Aren't you the tease?!
JerryPat2
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5 posted 2014-12-15 11:48 AM


Not trying to be, Lori, just trying to stay alive heah. Thanks for stopping by.

Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward.

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