Open Poetry #49 |
Long Nights |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
the nights can be long when reliving your past sins some you cringe within ©December 3, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
"some you cringe within" That is exactly what happens. Good write! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks. You finally showed up around here. Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Cringe is really a great word in this expression Jerry. I see you're still at the writing and fulfilling your greatest urge......Good at it too. I haven't been here for a long time. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
AH, I thought you were going to drop them for a while. Good write though. jo |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I know you haven't been here in a while, ethome. It isn't even close to being the site it used to be. Thank you for your kind words. Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sorry Jo. Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well said, dear Jerry, the night is a dark screen and we project our innermost thoughts and worries on it. Maybe you could try to outweigh old sins (they are forgiven long since, trust me) with exciting and happy dreams of love ... Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Appreciate your concern, Margherita, and I know you are right. Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Yes, some nights are long, Jerry. Maybe we should both listen to Margherita. Ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, you're right Ida, Margherita usually has the right things to say. Dammit I'm Mad is Dammit I'm Mad spelled backward. |
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