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Fabiani
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0 posted 2014-12-07 06:06 PM

Harmony in the chaos of confusion, ours self awareness is like cold fusion
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Margherita
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1 posted 2014-12-08 12:13 PM

Dear Jose Luis, you have come up with quite a thought provoking sentence. I agree that there can be harmony in apparent chaos and self awareness might well be associated to an explosion of light. (There are still doubts about cold fusion, but whatever fusion is fusion).

Margherita
RedStoneEB
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2 posted 2014-12-20 02:56 PM

sometimes when we trick ourselves into rhyme the meanings can get lost but if you listen to the whispers you'll see the light poetry doesn't have to rhyme you might get more depth going freestyle
Margherita
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3 posted 2014-12-20 05:02 PM

I totally agree with your words, Lee  

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