more and more - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2014-11-26 11:45 AM

More I think of her,
More I become crazy,
Less I think of her,
More I am unfortunate,
I am the wings of the mill,
I turn, I spin,
Without knowing why.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2014-11-26 04:31 PM

Dear Yann, this is a very lovely rendering of that state of mind and heart, when we can't stop focusing on the subject of our attraction. It seems we never grow out of such "spinning"

Love,
Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-11-26 05:03 PM

Eventually you will figure it all out, Yann, and although you may never forget, it will become less and less important. Believe me, it will.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2014-11-26 06:03 PM

Yann,
You did a great job here describing that one particular madness. We all know it well.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2014-11-27 12:34 PM

thanks Margherita, this spinning is so true as love can be, both are so linked , it seems weird and anxious sometimes

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2014-11-27 12:36 PM

hi Jerry, thanks for commenting and reading, perhaps what you say means there is no love anymore, something else occurs

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2014-11-27 12:38 PM

thanks lori, your comment reassures me in some way, this is vey akward to feel that

yann

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

7 posted 2014-11-27 03:03 PM

Obscession.
Very well described!

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2014-11-27 05:45 PM

thanks gale for comenting, you pick up an excellent word : obsession,

yann

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

9 posted 2014-11-28 01:33 AM

Yann, I SO understand your poem from personal experience, and I echo the words of Lori and Gale. I also echo Jerry's words, and as sad as that truth is, it is also a happy relief. Wishing you every happiness.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

10 posted 2014-11-29 05:24 AM

The ways of the heart are sometimes painful, yann. You have said it very well.
Ida

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

11 posted 2014-11-29 11:21 AM

thanks diana, for the prcious words and understaning, a pleasure to read you always

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

12 posted 2014-11-29 11:22 AM

thanks ida, my precious friend for understanding and commenting

yann

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.