Open Poetry #49 |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
More I think of her, More I become crazy, Less I think of her, More I am unfortunate, I am the wings of the mill, I turn, I spin, Without knowing why. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Yann, this is a very lovely rendering of that state of mind and heart, when we can't stop focusing on the subject of our attraction. It seems we never grow out of such "spinning" Love, Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eventually you will figure it all out, Yann, and although you may never forget, it will become less and less important. Believe me, it will. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yann, You did a great job here describing that one particular madness. We all know it well. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Margherita, this spinning is so true as love can be, both are so linked , it seems weird and anxious sometimes yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Jerry, thanks for commenting and reading, perhaps what you say means there is no love anymore, something else occurs yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks lori, your comment reassures me in some way, this is vey akward to feel that yann |
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Gale Senior Member
since 2013-06-10
Posts 578Russia |
Obscession. Very well described! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks gale for comenting, you pick up an excellent word : obsession, yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yann, I SO understand your poem from personal experience, and I echo the words of Lori and Gale. I also echo Jerry's words, and as sad as that truth is, it is also a happy relief. Wishing you every happiness. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The ways of the heart are sometimes painful, yann. You have said it very well. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks diana, for the prcious words and understaning, a pleasure to read you always yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks ida, my precious friend for understanding and commenting yann |
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