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Being Alone |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 all is closed down when alone except the brain from thought liberated the heart from misery you no longer think as "I" environment a muddy place shadow photos sans ambiance hovering showing unfilled silhouette only fathomless Permanence is there tranquility breathtaking if featureless It will take the place of all what once was you you are in the middle of anonymous thought ahhh . . . you are embarking on the wisdom of the infinite ©November 22, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
you are embarking on the wisdom of the infinite Blessed be the silence that offers such insight, dear Jerry! You have shared a precious moment, even though you associate it with a touch of melancholy. We are traveling souls and our essence radiates the beauty of who we are, always. Most beautiful offering today! Have a nice Sunday! Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Margherita always says it best my friend! I won't even try to top that. I'll just go with; uh huh, what she said!  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Your comment has completely made my day, Margherita, thank you very much. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks Lori, I hear you talking, thank you for being here. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I also thought that Margherita had said it all.You wrote something extra good and her reply can not be made any better. best to you, jo |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, Margherita can flat out make some fantastic comments, so can you,Jo. Thank you If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ditto! I really enjoy the way you express your feelings and thoughts. Nice, really nice, my friend. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hey JL, long time no see. Thanks for you kind comments. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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