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Window Gazing |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 something touched me deeply within my pulsating heart I was ready for it I needed it for I have to clean up my act even at the late day must be done I must destroy my sad, sad memories and turn my heart into a block of granite in order to see the pretty flowers without bitterweeds affecting their beauty ahhh . . . summer's heat into autumn's kaleidoscope leaves resembling a colorful festivity through my window's pane oh, for much too long I've looked past the beauty on such a crisp falling of the leaves day what a dazzling day outside this humble hovel ©November 14, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
and a dazzling poem as well with its kaleidoscope eyes within bringing us your view without |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes, what a colorful poem! An upbeat change of pace from the murky lurky beauty of the swamp. Good job!  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Emma, you are a treasure, thank you. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hi Lori, yeah you're right as always, every so often I leave the swamp for a new pair of shoes and see a different world. Many thanks. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Jerry, I love sitting by a sun filled window.The warmth and light to read by,or just to look out and see the subtle shades of life as it passes by everything out there. Oh look, the Mocking Bird is back and joins a few friends,the Cat Bird swishes by,as leaves and petals fall. A yellow Butter fly, fullers by. Nice thoughts fill the mind when sitting by a sun filled window.Thanks for the respite,Jo |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you Jo, for giving a very personal poem within your comments.  If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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