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Dakota
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since 2000-05-25
Posts 125
New York

0 posted 2014-11-09 01:22 PM



Surrounded by family, and yet so alone.
Entrapped in this house, I called my home.
Work everyday, just to try and survive.
Feeling no joy, neither dead, nor alive.

Trying to fit, the patriarch role.
Failing miserably, is taking its toll.
No role model, for the kids.
No support, for the wife.

What a waste, of a God given life!


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-11-09 04:32 PM


I relate pretty much to this, Dakota. I am not surrounded by family, I'm alone by choice. Still. I fit the mold of everything else you said.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
2 posted 2014-11-09 07:33 PM


Feeling for you here. Too many young men are going through these thoughts and there is really not much one can say to cheer you.
But do know you are not alone. Many  men who hold high positions also go though this. So what ever spot you hold, know you are not alone. Best to you Jo Perry

[This message has been edited by latearrival (11-10-2014 01:37 AM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-09-17 12:55 PM


fine writing...james
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
4 posted 2015-09-20 08:18 PM


It hurts...wow does it hurt. Doesn't matter how many people surround you, you can still be lonely. I think that's the worst pain there is.
Redstart
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since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

5 posted 2016-07-18 04:04 PM


I think you need a family-oriented conversation. Soon.
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