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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-11-06 07:56 AM




Visit me when I dream tonight,
And take me to unheard of heights.
Just bring yourself and nothing more,
We'll have each other to explore.

Bring with you your radiant smile,
That smile which so much your style.
When you are here my world lights up,
I'm wound up like a little pup.

Tonight when I lay down my head,
I'll be so lonesome in my bed.
Come to me, whisper in my ear,
And tell me I've nothing to fear.

It's been so cold here without you,
Just cuddle up like we want to.
Even though you are far away,
Come to me my darlin' I pray.

©November 5, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
MICHELMAS
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1 posted 2014-11-06 11:27 AM


Dreams. They are never in the place you expect them to be (quote Shirley Valentine)
Much enjoyed
Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-11-07 06:51 AM


This poem is dreamy! Excellent my friend!

Lori

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2014-11-07 07:29 AM


Appreciate your thoughts, Michael.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-11-07 07:30 AM


Thank you Lori.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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5 posted 2014-11-07 12:50 PM


With dreams as such, why wake up at all?
Nice to have such nighttime bliss aint it?

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2014-11-07 01:49 PM


Yes indeed, Emma, nice for sure. Thank you.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

Gale
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7 posted 2014-11-13 03:39 PM


Sometimes I think that dreaming is damnation.
Sometimes I ask myself why on earth I live in reality if everything I need is there on another side. Maybe I could dream without having a real body, why not? Why have I stuck in this world, where everything is possible and everything happens, everything excluding my dreams.
Yet nightmares come true every now and then.
Isn't it silly?

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2014-11-13 03:49 PM


Yep, Gale, it's silly in an honest sort of way. Our dreams can be a blessing of course. However as you touched upon they can be devastating, making you to sit straight up in bed gasping for breath and not being able to go back to sleep fearing the dream will come back. Thank you for stopping by.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

Margherita
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9 posted 2014-11-14 06:21 AM


Couldn't agree more with that kind of dreams, that give us a break from all our worries. You have chosen just the right tune, dear Jerry. This is really beautiful.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2014-11-14 07:37 AM


Thank you Margherita, dreams are a part of almost every ones makeup. Some we can interpret and smile about, some leave us wondering.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

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