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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2014-11-03 09:15 PM


Shadows in the sky

The night's moonlit clouds
Where do the heavens begin and end
Can I even tell the difference?

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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BluesSerenade
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1 posted 2014-11-03 09:32 PM


Pretty thoughts to ponder.
Redstart
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2 posted 2014-11-04 09:51 PM


just losing the full moon here, and as I look, I'd say the answer is, no. You got me off my backside to check from the kitchen window, and it was worth it. Thank you.
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3 posted 2014-11-16 09:47 PM


Can we?  This made me think.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2014-11-17 05:47 AM


Juju,
Apparently we are all going Hmmmmm? Good write. I enjoy a good thinker

jwesley
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5 posted 2014-11-20 11:02 AM


Nice, Juju - Heaven is what we make it, and I think heaven begins and ends "inside" each of us and it is how we walk through that space that determines what we see in the end of physical life. Looking skyward for it, isn't the solution - seeing inside ourselves, with sincere objectivity, and the effect we have on others, is.

j.

2islander2
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by the sea
6 posted 2014-11-24 01:00 PM


exquisite feelings just above our heads,


yann



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