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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
She stands away Her eyes flash Bright cuts the night I once could have loved Dreamt that dream Walked that path Kissed the hand Wooed her Made her mine Now those days That past me that long ago soul remembered and lauded Merely sat as audience Looks over at her too Perhaps she is beauty Perhaps she is trancendant But to me she is the other To me she looks like redemption I aint as good as I once was but I'm as good, once, as I ever was. - Toby Keith |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
"To me she looks like redemption" Killer line Walter, perfect ending. Lori  |
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