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Dreams Unfinnished
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Dreams Unfinnished |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Dreams Unfinished An oak grove in fall How the leaves drop like snow flakes Just like a child But these are the last Near by trees weep and crumble Oh, dreams unfinished -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thoughts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . Those unfulfilled dreams . . . They haunt us forever . . . If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
hauntingly beautiful |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
very good! enjoyed! Lori  |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-lovely thoughts and imagery from a lovely lady! (also, a finely succinct 'write')... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Touchingly beautiful, dear Juju. Love, Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah! A treatise on aging if ever I saw one, my friend - (maybe not exactly what you meant - but it's one of the things I see in this piece, along with the other possibilities others have already commented about). well done. j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
beautiful, leaves falling inspire poets everywhere yann |
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