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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-10-21 08:15 PM



women don't need to be beautiful
to attract the male sex
no indeed
but it isn't something teachable either
is just comes natural
it's the clothes they wear
not the showing too much skin
kind of clothes
but simple, even off the rack
kind which accents and brings out
her soft contours
again . . .
it is a built-in knowledge
it is her smile
honest and trustworthy
which tells men
they are something special in her eyes
there is no need
to present yourself as a spectacle
just be yourself
dress simply
let your natural woman dominate

©October 19, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton


If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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1 posted 2014-10-21 08:38 PM


Yes, indeed. The women who can captivate you with just their smile and sparkling eyes- those are the dangerous ones

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-10-21 08:42 PM


Amen Trina! hank you for that cool comment!

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

EmmaRose
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3 posted 2014-10-21 10:32 PM


so I have to throw out my black thigh highs
and stilletos

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-10-21 10:38 PM


If I could take the poem off I would, Emma. Sorry. Nothing wrong with wearing what you are talking about. I guess I just got silly.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

EmmaRose
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5 posted 2014-10-21 10:50 PM


nah..it's a great poem with heart and insight into the real beauty of a woman..Im just being sassy
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2014-10-21 11:00 PM


Eh . . . You may be right, I'm probably wrong. You know more about it I'm just a guy  who also loves flashy clothes too. It was just a poem, one I probably shouldn't have written.

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JerryPat2
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7 posted 2014-10-22 01:06 AM


WoW! Emma. I wrote to you and suddenly you have closed your email. What the heck?

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Gale
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8 posted 2014-10-22 01:46 AM


Nice read, Jerry!
I think you meant that wearing sexy clothes isn't necessary to be attractive, and if some girls like to dress cool and others are dressing simplier - both can be pleasant to men ) Smiling and other things are important

I could add that smelling is important not less. Each person has its own smell, and it can make relations real or impossible

JerryPat2
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9 posted 2014-10-22 08:13 AM


Thank you Gale, I know you are probably correct.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

EmmaRose
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10 posted 2014-10-22 11:32 AM


Hiya

No my email is not closed.
It's emrose355@aol.com but
I just wrote to you on your aol email
so hope you got it

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