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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-10-20 08:07 AM



please,
don't lead me
sometimes I may
not go along
at the same time
don't just follow me
because I may tire of leading
let us walk together
hand in hand

©October 15, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

© Copyright 2014 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
1 posted 2014-10-20 08:22 AM


That's the best way to take a journey, Enjoyed.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2014-10-20 08:53 AM


Thanks Trina, you betcha it's the best way.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2014-10-20 11:07 AM


Makes sense to me.
                Ida

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-10-20 11:14 AM


Of course it makes sense, but why is it so difficult to manage to do what it says. I realize in every relationship there is one who is the most dominate. This isn't always the man. I grew up in a household where my mother was the dominate one. Anyway, Ida, it would end much confusion, can I say divorce, if everyone could take each others hand.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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Florida
5 posted 2014-10-20 12:09 PM


Excellent Jerry.I am neither a leader nor a follower.I am my own person and enjoy strolling along with another of like mind. JO

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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6 posted 2014-10-20 12:24 PM


That is sorta what I had in mind, Jo, it is difficult to retain that kind of relationship, but like you it is something to strive for. Thanks for showing up.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
7 posted 2014-10-21 01:18 AM


Oh, it's very nice!
Maybe sometimes leading is good, for one of you can orientate better in some situations )
But not when it's only one and all the time )))

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