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Open Poetry #49

I Feel Better All Over More Than Anywhere Else

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-10-19 09:55 AM

raptured thoughts accost me mostly
obscuring thoughts
of this and that
these raptured thoughts
undulate like a surging surf
dredging up mangled corpses
of love wronged
in dribbled forget-me-nots
I no longer stand on solid ground
I've been transformed
into vaporous mists
it is within the quietness
of grief and hilarity
in this world without the heavens
everything has changed
in my world
except I still hold onto myself
for I still can

©October 18, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-19-2014 10:49 PM).]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-10-19 10:33 AM

Hang on good and tight my friend! A slippery grip on one's self is a scary thing, speaking from experience.
Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-10-19 10:34 AM

I know you are. I'm holding firm. (Go ahead and crack wise. Heh.Heh

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2014-10-19 06:18 PM

Your thoughts are truly spinning...yeah, hang on till the carousel stops or you grab the ring

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2014-10-19 06:36 PM

That's about all we can to, VAS, thank you.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

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