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I Walk the Walk
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I Walk the Walk |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I walk the walk I've made friends with the shadow I need nothing else we're buddies, he and I we bare ourselves to the cold wind the one they sing about Mariah the days are long nights they stretch out still . . . I walk the walk it's all about the walk and friendly shadows ©Jerry Pat Bolton If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Another insightful poem by you, dear Jerry. Your vision of the shadow as a buddy is quite enthralling. And yes, it's all about the walk, the Path. This awareness is important indeed. Very good job. Margherita |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
good to find solace with just you and your shadow, most times I find it to be the best company of all  and your Zoe of course |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Emma, as quiet as it is kept Zoe is my shadow. She is a special little dog. I know, everyone who has a dog, especially a house dog comes to that "special" conclusion. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I appreciate your thoughts about my poem, Margherita. The Path. Yes indeed, The Path. Sometimes we get lost on The Path, and that is when walking the walk comes in handy. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What else can we do, Jerry. ida |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Not much else, Ida. |
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