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Open Poetry #49

Motivation

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-10-15 08:15 AM

in space
I'm the dearth
of space
you are too I imagine
but I don't know you
I guess
it is always so
with me
no matter where I am
I'm the part that isn't there
as I walk from place to place
the air
like Moses' Sea parts
then closes back together
as I leave that space
that is my quest in life
my motivation for
my wandering walks
to make space
adept at closing
the air behind me
practice makes perfect

©October 5, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2014-10-16 11:38 AM

A quite original thought you express here, dear Jerry. The dearth of space can become a torment, but it's not you, but your feeling. We move ahead in search of new space, in a certain sense we feel confined in this big/yet infinitely small place that is our Earth compared to the Universe/Universes that surround us.

Just my interpretation

of your thought provoking work.

Margherita

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-10-16 12:00 PM

Ahhh . . . as usual, Margherita , your interpretation is spot on. Thank you much for being here and expressing yourself.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

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