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Open Poetry #49

Dreamer By The Tree

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2014-10-13 08:00 PM

Dreamer By The Tree

Any Day now
The leaves will fall
And there will be nothing between us
Until the chill
Numbs my body

This blessed oak tree
Is no longer my home

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-10-13 08:27 PM

Ahhh . . . The shelter and confidante is no more. Sorry.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

alan6501
Member

since 2004-01-03

Posts 89
PA

2 posted 2014-10-13 10:07 PM

I love it. You are so exposed and vulnerable at the end and I sure have known that feeling.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2014-10-16 12:18 PM

But still you call it "blessed" and I love that. This is a most poignant write!

Love,
Margherita

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2014-10-17 01:24 PM

OWSa!

it makes me feel the bard ever so greatly

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

5 posted 2014-10-22 12:46 PM

Beautiful, beautiful, poignant as hell. Well done, feeling this.

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