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A Beginning
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A Beginning |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 I stretch to touch you fingers quiver achingly they tenderly caress becoming as one with you your lips slightly parted allow my reaching touch with an audible sigh almost like a protest song combating ghosts I connect with you beneath the sheen of paint and powder and oh, you are beautiful inside and out although you think not don’t go stay with me allow me to reach you where no one before has touched you sensually If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You write the most tender love poems... Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many thanks, Lori. I have the most tender feelings whenever I decide to write one. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, this is quite a compelling beginning, dear Jerry. I agree with Lori, these words are tender gems. Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Many, many thanks to you, Margherita, for your kind and generous words. Sometimes the inner you comes out, and when it does there is strength in love words. If they give you ruled paper write sideways. |
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