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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-10-06 08:27 PM



I'm the Hermit of Savoie's Swamp,
And your true love belongs to me,
Night's when I dream I romp and stomp,
Into your maison I then creep,
I hold my breath under the stairs,
You welcome me with open smile,
I hug you, then strum my guitar,
And play Jolie Blon; that's my style.


If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (10-07-2014 09:01 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-10-07 06:46 AM


I know there is a perfect Cajun response to this... I just don't know what it is. Sounds like a song!

Lori

JerryPat2
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Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-10-07 08:30 AM


Good morning, Lori, I don't know a response to this little ditty either. Thank you for showing up.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

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