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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2014-10-05 07:38 AM


And I want it all
all the luxuries
the diamonds
the pearls
everything

because
I'm so close
to wanting, needing-
becoming
nothing

and nothing is terrifying


-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2014-10-05 08:19 AM


Trina,
you always strike a nerve when you write. You always say an unspoken something out loud. I really love that about your work.

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2014-10-05 08:21 AM


Lori is absolutely right, Trina, your poetry is always mesmerizing and gives us a little oomph.

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

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