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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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0 posted 2014-10-04 04:56 PM





About what I said last night
After we were through
And I was holding you

I said you were so special…
Understanding and accepting

I didn’t feel broken anymore
I felt celebrated

I told you
How much I loved you

I would have told you more…
But you started to snore

Just wanted to know today
If you had heard me last night

Yes, that’s the way I felt, it’s true.
And, I still do…


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-10-04 05:06 PM


Pillow talk . . . Happy for you . . .

If they give you ruled paper write sideways.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2014-10-06 02:26 PM


fine blend of 'slice of real life' and Romanticism !
Redstart
Senior Member
since 2014-05-16
Posts 535

3 posted 2014-10-06 04:31 PM


He never heard, did he?  I love the honesty and the heart of this.
EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
4 posted 2014-10-06 10:34 PM


say it again
say it again
say it again

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
5 posted 2014-10-07 04:54 AM


Sometimes it's enough just to say it whether he heard it or not - I think.  
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