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Open Poetry #49

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-09-30 08:18 AM

speak to me
breathe . . .
your fresh wounds of erosion
words you never wanted me to hear
breathe
into my ear
that you finally understand
nothing on this earth is free
especially love
tell me you know I've been right
even when
beguiled by perfume and soft lips
I have discovered
it's compulsory to liberate oneself
from public decency in order
to live decently
it isn't too late you know
I know you think you've freed yourself
so why then are you still crying

©September 19, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2014-09-30 06:45 PM

I like it..thought provoking for sure.
I'm thinking how the truth shall set you free.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-09-30 07:09 PM

I'm thinking the same thing about truth,
Blues, there is, and has been, much untruth going on.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Gale
Senior Member

since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

3 posted 2014-09-30 08:57 PM

Just love it.
No explanations )

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2014-09-30 09:19 PM

Thank you very much, Gale.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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