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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2014-09-24 08:16 AM



an appearance of dawn
motionlessness the heavens seem to be
mocking my over-indulgent fantasy
about existence, demise, sleep
are the previous monotonous resonance
of old unchanging thoughts
my inner self harmonious with yours
we are two spirits
if you believe in spirits
we are the endless flourishing entities
within our boundaries

so, here I sit
looking out my window
as the sun creeps into view
wondering if spirits
can break down barriers
and speak with one another
can touch
"Touch?"
and feel the pulsating pounding
of two hearts as one

©Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (09-24-2014 09:57 AM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2014-09-24 12:30 PM


JP-I think that somewhere in our sleep we go a visiting hither and yon (no pun intended) as our spirit calls us to do.

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-09-24 12:40 PM


I couldn't disprove your statement, nor would I want to, Lori. I say let the spirits wander and collate what they have found and maybe  back to me bits and pieces of the wandering. Thank you.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Gale
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since 2013-06-10
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3 posted 2014-09-24 04:08 PM


They can, Jerry!
And I like your poem

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2014-09-24 04:15 PM


Ahhh . . . That is wonderful that you believe the spirits can communicate, Gale. I digging into reincarnation pretty heavily these days and in face I'm writing a novel about it. Thank you.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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