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Open Poetry #49

Opening My Eyes

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2014-09-19 08:13 AM

since knowing sha
I've had my closed eyes opened
to places I'd never gone to before
she fooled around with my heart
time marched on
would that we could have ran away, baby
drinking cheap
California burgundy 'neath the skies
be hippy-like
following the sunrise
sundown and the black night sky
we're not young
still, I'd like to live on the edge together
each day
consoling each others' injured hearts
make them well
I know I could not
visualize living any other way
ahhh . . .
I'm having grand feelings
just thinking of what might have been
for they are eternal

©September 17, 2014 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-09-19 08:22 AM

Can feel you smiling here... Enjoy your happy poems. And maybe I say it too often, but it is true that love looks good on you!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-09-19 08:33 AM

It feel quite good also, Lori. Thanks for chiming in.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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