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Open Poetry #49

Autumn Song

secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2014-09-18 01:29 PM

         Autumn Song

Here amid dancing clouds
  and weightless dreams,
a deep-forest moon floats
the vast eternal sky of
infinite star field splendor
and bathes this ancient land
  of ‘endless’ hills
in pure and gentle moonlight.
On this mystic Autumn evening,
when the veil seems thinnest
between worlds within worlds,
the voice of a night wind
sings through falling leaves
some long forgotten Celtic
tune of life and love and loss in
celebration of the penultimate
certainties of emptiness,
transience, and change.

                     --- b. e. adams (9/18/2014)

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-09-18 02:25 PM

You herald Autumn's arrival splendidly. The change of seasons usually brings out the best in poets worldwide.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2014-09-19 12:06 PM

Lovely tribute to my favorite season.
Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2014-09-19 04:29 AM

my very favorite season also !

KAM39
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4 posted 2014-09-19 03:51 PM

Well done, love the picture you painted with this.

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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5 posted 2014-09-20 11:06 AM

many thanks to each of you for your comment/reply postings on this 'write!'

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