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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2014-09-06 04:27 PM



Fragile my heart is now,
desolate of love and friendship.
Death and circumstance leave me
alone, calling across gloaming wilderness
as a wolf abandoned by

the pack,weakened by solitude.
But bounding back to life
is but one dream away,
this heart was not made
for darkness,but love for

all who love. My call
for the pack will be
answered on a new morning
bathed by a golden dawn
matched only by my coruscating

lovelight and velvet crimson heart.
Goodness and freedom are me,
to cherish these and those
who i may love dearly
is my truest heartfelt wish.

all that live must die,passing through nature to eternity... William Shakespeare

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latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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Florida
1 posted 2014-09-06 05:53 PM


A lovely plea.Have faith ~ one never really knows. Love at an older time of life can be much more fulfilling. From one who knows.Best to you GOlden Rose. Jo
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2014-09-06 07:57 PM


excellent Romanticism of sincere and finest purity!
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
3 posted 2014-09-07 01:16 PM


Your poetry is golden and full of heart.
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4 posted 2014-09-08 10:34 AM


I love the hope in your words!! What a beautiful reminder to us all!
Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2014-09-10 06:21 PM


Very lovely, dear Phil. And I like "coruscating lovelight", a new word in my vocabulary. I also like your attitude.

Margherita

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
6 posted 2014-09-10 10:56 PM


a romantic you've always been, this being right in line . . .

as usual - enjoyed reading you,

j.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2014-09-14 04:07 PM


Still writing the good write, Phil.
                              ida

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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Watertown, NY
8 posted 2014-09-22 07:56 AM


This is lovely. Enjoyed.

-Trina
I'll keep these dreams hidden
inside these eyes of mine
until my tears fall
unto my tainted hear

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2015-08-20 09:44 PM


very nice...james
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